HMD ( For Terminal Tokyo )

[innermonologues]

HMD

Do you have any helpful crit? Like what you see or think I could change a few things? I'd really appreciate any suggestions and help you might have and here's the spot to do it.

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[(Anonymous)]

Hi there! First I'd like to say that it's always fun to see Squall around. However, I've noticed that sometimes you give really short tags that are a bit difficult to reply to. Little things like introspection and gestural cues can really help in that regard. I know Squall isn't very talkative of a character, but he is introspective, and that can be a useful way to help other players direct threads.

It's just a thought, though, and please don't take this as a slant against your character because that's not my intent.

[innermonologues]

Thank you for the crit! Squall is kind of out of my normal character type so getting helpful hints like this really helps me play him better. I really need to put more into my tags even if it's just more of what he's thinking. I used to do that a lot and I'm not really sure why I stopped doing that. And I'll see what I can do about writing more of like his body language in my tags too.

I really do appreciate this comment you left me. and I'm glad you like seeing this brat around too.